Writing to April Poetry Prompt 11
With the Folon sculpture "The Rain/Man of Rain" in mind. It is situated on Via Aretina Firenze--a short distance away from the FAA and the Arno ... I know it well.
Where the Light Gathers Rain
(for every dream that dared the rain)
I found you folded small inside the crate
A breath away from rising into form.
I pulled the cord and waited by the gate
And watched you gather color from the storm.
You shimmered like a ship against the blue
Your walls were thin but strong enough to climb.
I almost thought I saw the world made new
And counted every hour as borrowed time.
But morning pulled the sky too far away;
Your edges sagged and emptied in the sun.
No hands could hold the light you tried to stay
No thread could bind the thing we had begun.
Still sometimes when the fields are soft with rain
I think I see you rising through the mist.
A ghost of silver stretching out again--
A dream too brief but far too sweet to miss.
So here’s my hand a wave into the sky
A wish sewn lightly through the breaking blue:
Float where the better brighter chances lie;
I’ll build no trap to try and capture you.
Mari 27/04/2025
Writing to Pompt 12
He Ain't Heavy
--the bearers of time carry the heavens
I took his weight before I knew his name
A shape that leaned without a word or plea.
The road was long the stars were much the same
But now I felt their light fall differently.
His hand half-lost in mine was soft and still--
A trust unasked yet offered all the same.
I bore him not through duty but through will
A love that never seeks the badge of fame.
But then he spoke and I was not the strong:
He named the stars I'd never dared to see.
His song though soft became my marching song.
The one I carried now was carrying me.
And burden once a word of aching tone
Now sings of joy -- for I have not walked alone.
Mari 28/04/2025
I was travelling in Italy in April and there's a statue of St. Anthony in the Basilica in Padua that interlinked in my mind with the original prompt. The town I grew up in had a big connecion to the Franciscans they were/are good guys and good community men.
Mari Fitzpatrick
12 April at 05:08 --
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12th April 2025 Poetry Prompt
From 'Boys Town:' He Ain’t
14th April
The Stair Made of Stories
Opening Verse:
If you open your eyes on the breath of a wish
You may find a world curled in the shape of a dish
Or a stair made of stories that rise without end
Where each step is a question each railing a friend.
Prompt:
Imagine a realm where each step you take leads you deeper into a narrative universe--a staircase woven from tales where every ascent unveils a new story and every handrail whispers secrets of the past. Build a poem that embarks on this journey exploring the fusion of imagination and reality.
Considerations
Begin with a moment of quiet reflection or a whispered wish.
Describe the transformation of the ordinary into the extraordinary.
Let each stanza represent a step revealing a new facet of this imaginative world.
Infuse your poem with sensory details to bring the fantastical elements to life and have a bit of fun ...
Optional/Optical Inclusions
Questions that challenge the narrator's perceptions.
An oval-shaped world or object symbolizing the unexpected.
A staircase that defies conventional architecture.
Personified elements (e.g. a railing that offers advice).
April 12th
Poetry Prompt
From 'Boys Town:' He Ain’t Heavy…
Prompt
In Boys Town the words “He ain’t heavy Father… he’s m’brother--appeared in chalk on the dormitory board and it later inspired the song--write a poem about what it means to carry someone else.
This could be a literal burden: helping a sibling through illness carrying a child across difficult terrain supporting a friend through grief. Or it could be metaphorical: bearing another’s memory protecting a legacy carrying the stories of someone who couldn’t go on.
Explore the quiet endurance of love and responsibility--not as duty but as devotion.
Who have you carried and who has carried you?
When does burden become blessing?
How do we speak of sacrifice without sorrow?
What invisible weights shape our posture our pace our poetic/real world?
Whether grounded in reality or metaphor let this prompt be a tribute to loyalty brotherhood and the unspoken courage of care.
April 10th
The Roadrunner's Code
Write a poem from the spirit of the Roadrunner--not necessarily in words he’d say (he only says beep-beep) but in the rhythm and instinct of his being. This is a creature who never stops to explain who glides just ahead of disaster always one clever beat away from capture.
Let your poem celebrate speed timing intuition--an untamed dance with danger that never breaks a sweat. The Roadrunner doesn’t gloat he simply is. There is something pure elusive and free in that kind of existence.
Echoes on the Trail
What is it like to move through the world untouched by failure?
How does speed shape thought? Or erase the need for thought?
What does the Roadrunner see in those brief glances backward?
Is he running from something--or simply running because?
Keep your lines short punchy playful--leave space between the stanzas. And when in doubt let the wind finish your sentence.
Beep beep 🙂
April 8th
Poetry Prompt: Dial M for Murder (Hitchcock 1954)
Write a poem structured like a ticking clock. Begin with calm--a party a phone call a dinner being set--and slowly build toward a planned act that hides beneath civility. Someone in the poem knows more than they should. Someone else is about to be betrayed.
Let suspense build through time: minutes pass small details accumulate a plan unfolds under the guise of routine. The tension should rise not through violence but through the slow inevitable march toward it.
You might write from the perspective of the one being set up the one doing the setting up or an observer (even the clock itself).
The ending can twist--failures reversals or last-minute revelations welcome.
What details reveal the deception before it’s fully exposed?
Is the act coldly calculated or born from desperation?
Who is the victim really--and what does “victim" mean here?
How does time itself pressure the poem pulsing underneath?
Each stanza composed is a tick closer to something that cannot be undone. Let the reader feel the dread tighten like a noose made of words.
April 6th
Rebecca (Hitchcock 1940)
--the shadowed corridors of Manderley and the ever-present echo of someone gone but not gone.
Poetry Prompt:
Write a poem haunted by someone who is no longer physically present but whose influence remains--thick in the air etched into walls echoing in speech gestures habits. This figure might be a lover a rival a parent or even a former version of the self. They’re never named outright never directly addressed--but they shape every corner of the poem.
Let your verses drip with memory unspoken comparisons quiet dread. The speaker might be trying to live a new life build a new relationship or simply exist--yet the ghost of the past is always watching judging influencing.
From the Wings:
How does the presence of this figure make itself known?
What has been left behind--an object a scent a routine?
How does the speaker's current relationship bend under the weight of this memory?
Does the speaker long for this figure fear them or resent their hold?
Paint a manor full of locked doors cold fireplaces and whispers down empty halls. Illustrate not the ghost--but the space they’ve never quite left.
April 4th
April Poetry Prompt: North by Northwest (Hitchcock 1959)
Write a poem that drops the speaker--or a character--into the middle of a thrilling chase the result of a case of mistaken identity. They don’t know why they’re being followed only that someone--or something--is closing in. The story must be told in fragments as if overheard on a train platform glimpsed from a taxi window or shouted across a wind-swept field.
Keep the poem breathless and tense with clipped lines swift transitions and unexpected turns. Use disorientation to your advantage. You’re crafting a poetic fugitive’s tale--complete with glamour danger and the heady rush of not knowing what comes next.
Reflections:
Who does the world think you are and who are you really?
What is chasing you and what are you running from?
Can you trust the stranger offering you shelter--or are they part of the plot?
Where is the turning point the place where you decide to stop running or take control?
Let your lines race like a train through the night with danger at every crossing and revelation waiting just beyond the horizon.